Liked the animation a lot.
Didn't like Light's voice.

I liked it at first, it seemed like a good parody.

But yeah the editing got annoying really quick.

Your comic style is good for what it is. As you continue to do it and improve naturally I can see these being stolen and posted all over social media.

Be proud of yourself.

I love it but my one complaint is the Knives' head looks a little small compared to Ramona's

I like this a lot but I'm wondering if the (slightly) dis proportionate face is just your style or if it's an accident.
Like I said the rest is great, but after looking at your other artwork I notice the faces generally 'lean' to the right.