Liked the animation a lot.
Didn't like Light's voice.
I liked it at first, it seemed like a good parody.
But yeah the editing got annoying really quick.
It's like Dark Souls but with a pinball.
I love it.
Your comic style is good for what it is. As you continue to do it and improve naturally I can see these being stolen and posted all over social media.
Be proud of yourself.
I love it but my one complaint is the Knives' head looks a little small compared to Ramona's
Yeah I kinda noticed that as soon as I was done with the drawing... I tried to make it look like Knives' head was pointing towards the camera but it just wasn't working out for me haha.
I like this a lot but I'm wondering if the (slightly) dis proportionate face is just your style or if it's an accident.
Like I said the rest is great, but after looking at your other artwork I notice the faces generally 'lean' to the right.
I honestly never noticed the trend until now. I can probably attribute it to the fact that I'm way more comfortable drawing faces turned to the right. I'm drawing more and more left turning faces now so I hope this will improve. Thanks for the feedback!
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